Pirate Manifesto: fünfter Änderungsantrag [hinfällig]

[Hoshpak]

Der Antrag korrigiert, zumindest nach meinem Wissen über die englische Sprache, einen Rechtschreibfehler.

Es gibt zwei Optionen:

Option 1: Die alte Version beibehalten

Advances in technology has enabled the whole world to exercise our rights and embrace our liberties in ways previously unimagined. It has allowed increased involvement in democracy, and helped to remove the barriers between people all around the world; however, unwisefully used, they could become a tool of division, discrimination and lessening of rights and liberties. To avoid this and take the most advantage from all that an Information Society can offer, there are three goals to be fulfilled.

Option 2: Die korrigierte Version übernehmen

Advances in technology have enabled the whole world to exercise our rights and embrace our liberties in ways previously unimagined. It has allowed increased involvement in democracy, and helped to remove the barriers between people all around the world; however, unwisefully used, they could become a tool of division, discrimination and lessening of rights and liberties. To avoid this and take the most advantage from all that an Information Society can offer, there are three goals to be fulfilled.

EDIT:Dieser Antrag ist aufgrund einer Änderung im Einreichungsverfahren hinfällig geworden und daher gesperrt. Der Thread dient nur noch der Dokumentation des Antrags.

[IceHawk]

Wo ist der Unterschied?
[edit: Suchen, nix finden, fragen, nochmal suchen, doch finden... Alles klar, ich habs gefunden.]